SMPK1 is a good school, it’s pretty big and the
best school in West Java. It has 3 programs such as Regular, Bilingual, and
DCP. DCP uses English all time. In the tenth grade, the DCP students will
receive the Cambridge Certificate. DCP has more English classes than the other
program. Bilingual use both language, Bahasa Indonesia and English. Regular
uses Bahasa Indonesia. There is only one class for DCP in each grade, 3-4
classes for Bilingual, and the rest five classes are for Regular. There are up to
30 students in each Regular classes but there are 20 students in DCP class.
My school has a various choices of
extracurricular. For sports lovers, our school have lots of choices such as
soccer, basketball, table tennis, swimming and many other. Many girls choose
make-up, cooking and modern dance. You can choose 1 extracurricular and you
quit or change it until next year. There is an exception if the teachers ask
you to join Math club, Science club or English club. You may have 2
extracurricular. You also can join many English, Math and Science competitions.
Our school also has an organization called OSIS Efraim. They has their own
extracurricular, leadership. Same rule applied if you join leadership.
In my school, Saturday is holiday. Sometimes,
teachers ask the students to join remedies on Saturday. Some of the students
come to school to do their projects or to join extracurricular. We have 2
breaks on Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday and go home on the second break on
Thursday and Friday.
Every Friday, the seventh graders will join scouts. The eighth and ninth don’t
have to join scout anymore.

I think that this the best post from al of your other posts in your blog. The flow of this post is smooth and also descriptive. The tenses used are also good enough. I like the way that you put some not common words in italic.
BalasHapusOverall, you did a very great job!
I think you did a great job and you explained your school well. The only thing is that some of the words are underlined, you could fix it :))
BalasHapusI think you did a good job, you explained your school but something's missing, you forgot to put the rules so as a reader of this leaflet if i dont know the rules, i wont join this school. You did a good jub but put more efforts.Thanks :)
BalasHapus