HAPPY EASTER GUYS!!!!!!
Sorry, I'm late
Easter is a holiday.This year Easter was celebrated on Sunday,March 27. Easter is held 3 days after the Good Friday, where Jesus was Crucified. Easter reminds us about Jesus' resurrection. Jesus has died and rose again in the third day. He died in the cross to save us. He love us more than anything. That's why he gave his live and died for us.
Easter also called 'Pascha'. Easter is also very similar with Passover. It is represented by Eggs and Bunnies and represented for a reason. Christians believed that the Eggs and Bunnies means renewed.
I think that the sentences are arranged badly. The tenses are still mixed up. I suggest that you can make the writing longer, even though it is short and understandable enough. On the other side, I like the way that you put different colors in the writing, which makes it more colorful and interesting. Overall, I hope that you can improve more in your writings later on.
BalasHapusFor me the senteces are good enough, but i think you should give some picture to make it more interesting and also your text is really really colourfull but it is better to choose only one colour. it is good that you posted a blog about easter and Jesus but the sentences are short. You should put more effort
BalasHapus